Mary DeVries
Apr 29, 2021

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I like your story. With only two views you know the title is the reason. With so much material here you need to give people a reason to read.

Not all of Medium is intellectual. Not by a long shot. Your subject matter is perfect for Medium and mentioning Tik Tok is fine.

Give people a reason to read in the the title. Something along the lines of "Finding your perfect mantra on TikTok" or even drawing out a line from the song.

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Mary DeVries
Mary DeVries

Written by Mary DeVries

I delight, despair and write about a life lived around the world. Fueled by Yorkshire Gold tea.

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