Mary DeVries
Jul 31, 2021

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The story you tell in the Friendship Group is very compelling and personal. Again your voice and emotion shine through and that's great.

I suspect curation here comes down to editing. After a certain number of errors, curation won't happen. Try running Grammerly and reading it out loud to yourself to make sure everything flows well and is correct.

This is an important message. I'd consider rewriting this one into a new story. Thanks for sharing it with us. I know it really hurts to spill your heart and have it not picked up.

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Mary DeVries
Mary DeVries

Written by Mary DeVries

I delight, despair and write about a life lived around the world. Fueled by Yorkshire Gold tea.

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