Mary DeVries
Dec 4, 2020

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This is a great read and an inspiring example. I really like the way you put the two questions you would answer near the top and then went on to answer them. One change I would suggest is to cut up the sentence above. I think merely listing the questions implies that you will eventually answer them making your reassurance unnecessary. Also it would feel like a bit of a tease, an implied keep reading to see if I answer these questions.

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Mary DeVries
Mary DeVries

Written by Mary DeVries

I delight, despair and write about a life lived around the world. Fueled by Yorkshire Gold tea.

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