You have an important message here. I think if would work better if you fleshed it out just a little bit more. Including some of your own journey would be a great way to do that. Or you could link to some research on highly sensitive people.

Also, it's a minor thing but I'd change "that" to "the" in the title, "Be the Princess..."

I think your strongest paragraph is the one that starts, "Many of us sensitive souls.." I would move this up to the beginning of the story. That might grab your readers a little harder.